Post by Smokeleaf on May 19, 2009 19:30:10 GMT -5
Name: Smokepaw (Smokeleaf)
Rank: Apprentice
Age: 9 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: SootClan
Kin: none
Mate: too young
Mentor: Sinistermask
Pelt: The base of Smokepaw's pelt is a very basic ashen gray, thus the "smoke" part of her name. But as she grew older, darker gray stripes became evident on her coat. This would include a "stalk of wheat" on her forehead and a basic tracing of her ribs and spine on her back. Her tail is long, easily compared to a stem, and ringed with the same dark gray fur. All of these brought upon the image of a leaf in her leader's eyes, resulting in the revival of her soon-to-be-suffix.
Eyes: Smokepaw's eyes are a warm, light blue, like the color of the sky when you look straight up. They show intelligence that she has yet to learn, and a concerningly limited level of confidence and knowing.
Personality: Unlike the brave, confident cats surrounding her, Smokepaw is lost in her kit years. She doesn't talk much, and when she does, sounds hardly above a whisper. She is also blindly loyal in groups, but alone, entirely indecisive. Despite her knowing or wanting, she is an excellent fighter. Unfortunately she tends to question and contemplate each battle up until the fighting moment, in which case she figures out who she'll attack first and how to do it. By the time she's sure of herself, the battle is over. She has yet to learn when to think and when to react, much to the disapproval of her Clan mates.
History: Despite Smokepaw's lack of confidence, Smokekit was more daring than even the deputy. She would often find herself getting into heaps of trouble after exploring the forest or stealing from the fresh-kill pile. After a while, it became the apprentice's duty to keep an eye on her, which became less desired than changing the elders' bedding.
Rank: Apprentice
Age: 9 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: SootClan
Kin: none
Mate: too young
Mentor: Sinistermask
Pelt: The base of Smokepaw's pelt is a very basic ashen gray, thus the "smoke" part of her name. But as she grew older, darker gray stripes became evident on her coat. This would include a "stalk of wheat" on her forehead and a basic tracing of her ribs and spine on her back. Her tail is long, easily compared to a stem, and ringed with the same dark gray fur. All of these brought upon the image of a leaf in her leader's eyes, resulting in the revival of her soon-to-be-suffix.
Eyes: Smokepaw's eyes are a warm, light blue, like the color of the sky when you look straight up. They show intelligence that she has yet to learn, and a concerningly limited level of confidence and knowing.
Personality: Unlike the brave, confident cats surrounding her, Smokepaw is lost in her kit years. She doesn't talk much, and when she does, sounds hardly above a whisper. She is also blindly loyal in groups, but alone, entirely indecisive. Despite her knowing or wanting, she is an excellent fighter. Unfortunately she tends to question and contemplate each battle up until the fighting moment, in which case she figures out who she'll attack first and how to do it. By the time she's sure of herself, the battle is over. She has yet to learn when to think and when to react, much to the disapproval of her Clan mates.
History: Despite Smokepaw's lack of confidence, Smokekit was more daring than even the deputy. She would often find herself getting into heaps of trouble after exploring the forest or stealing from the fresh-kill pile. After a while, it became the apprentice's duty to keep an eye on her, which became less desired than changing the elders' bedding.