Post by {Lightspring} on May 22, 2009 1:10:42 GMT -5
Be forewarned: If you haven't read at least Eragon, you'll be confused so far. XD I only have one chapter done (workin' on the second) and it's all in Alagaësia. The Inkheart part will probably come in the third chapter. Anyway, critiques are loved dearly, even saying it's horrible, as long as you tell me what I can fix. ^^ Hope ya guys like it! I'll try and keep it updated when I finish the second chapter.
I claim no ownership to anything in this story. Except the plot. That's mine.
To clear up confusion ahead of time:
"This is speaking. Of course."
This is thoughts.
"This is Saphira or the like speaking."
First chapter is solely in Alagaësia, and is based after Brisngr. Please pardon my...Lack of writing skills. D: Any R&R will be appreciated!
Part one: The Finding
The border was in view, a simple sign on the barren road, halfway hidden amongst the cloud of dust that rose with the wind. Surda; it was a tiny place, a small blemish on the Empire, and yet it still stood strong. A lone horse stood out on the plain, it's head bent low in an attempt to gain speed. The stallion's rider, a large, burly man sat hunched in the saddle, his hood pulled over his eyes. The man's pack was stuffed with a few supplies and letters, but his head carried a huge load of information, gathered by his short time wandering the remote villages. It surprised him how much those towns found out. With a grunt, Jeod adjusted his reins, peering to each side nervously. There was no law against him traveling in the Empire…but he did happen to have a decent bounty on his head, which made things a bit difficult. Once he crossed the border, he would be safe. Or, at least, safer than he was now. So intent he was on the ride, the man hardly noticed the stranger until his horse came to a skidding halt, grunting loudly with his ears lain back. Nearly thrown, Jeod leaned forward to rub the spooked animal on its neck.
“Steady Milan, steady,” he murmured softly, then straightened, one hand on the hilt of his sword. Dark eyes narrowed in suspicion, he got a firmer grasp on the reins, edging Milan forward a few steps. “Hail yourself!” he commanded sharply, peering into the bright sunlight in an attempt to see the stranger’s face. “Who are you, and what’s your purpose?“ A strangled wheezing sound came from within the hood, what Jeod could only imagine was supposed to be a laugh. The traveler seemed to be quite old, judging by his posture and a wisp of white hair that blew in the wind.
“What does it matter who I am, my dear friend?” he rasped, putting both hands into the pockets of his cloak. “What really matters is to know who you are.” With another wheezy chuckle, he took a step forward, causing Milan to lay his ears back once more. With hawk-like eyes glinting in the shadows, the man peered intently at the saddlebags. “I see you’ve been busy on your little spying job, eh?” With a startled grunt, Jeod had his broadsword out in an instant, the tip inches from the old man’s chest. The blade, glinting in the noon-day sun, was held nearly stock still, every nerve in the scholars body prepared to drive it though a chest. Still, his voice held steady.
“I haven’t seen the likes of you in Surda, so you cannot claim any ‘friendship’ just yet,” he snarled, one hand still gripping his steed’s reins. “Now I ask you again; what’s your purpose?” Not seeming the least bit worried about the fact that he seemed seconds away from being impaled, the stranger simply shook his head, almost sorrowfully.
“Ah, what times are these that suspicion runs though every thought?” he seemed to mutter to himself. “Why Jeod, even you are hostile and untrusting.” An eerie pause seemed to hang over the dead landscape, even leaving Milan still and silent.
“Who are you?” Jeod finally asked, though it was more of a question than a demand now. Quickly taking back his prompt manner, however, he scowled. “You may know of my name, but many do at this time. How do you plan on proving yourself worthy of life?” With a chuckle, the old man took his eyes away for a moment, rummaging in a bag that hung by his waist. With a noise of satisfaction, he pulled out a tightly wrapped parcel, the twine around it crossing over itself a few times before ending in a small knot.
“I think this should be of some interest to Nasuada,” he said quietly, holding the package out. With a puzzled glare, Jeod peered at it for a moment. Against his better judgment, he lowered the blade slightly and reached forward to grab the bundle, almost expecting it to be filled with snakes. Removing his gaze from the stranger, he lay the broadsword across one knee carefully and took to inspecting the package. Feeling the edges gingerly, the man looked up once more.
“It’s a book…” Cutting off, Jeod whipped around, his eyes wide as he found the road in front of him deserted. With a muttered curse, he peered through the harsh sunlight, expecting to see the ragged form running off in some direction or the other, but found only sand. No normal person would be able to hide themselves in this landscape, though he knew Eragon would have no trouble with it. With a slight shiver, he spurred Milan forward once more, intending to get to Surda before the sun set. If that…man was one of the king’s magicians, he could have a whole patrol on him in minutes. Though if he were a traitor to the Empire…the book could prove to be some worth. Glancing down at the scruffy parcel, Jeod sniffed. A few spell casters could look it over before it went anywhere near Nasuada…